Sunday, 10 March 2024

'The People on Platform 5' by Clare Pooley

We are invited to board the daily commuter train from Hampton Court to Waterloo Station, where ordinary lives intersect in unexpected ways. While the premise promises intrigue and human connection, the execution leaves so much to be desired and what we get are:

Predictable Plot Twists:  Sanjay and Emmie’s eventual union? Foreseeable from the moment they shared that grape-induced Heimlich manoeuvre. Toby’s betrayal? As transparent as the train windows. It’s as if the author handed us a timetable of events, and we obediently followed along.

Convenient Resolutions: The story unfolds with the precision of a Swiss watch. Every character’s predicament—be it love, career, or personal growth—magically resolves itself. Candida’s greed? Predictable. Martha’s quirky existence in a David Attenborough-inspired world? Amusing, but hardly surprising. Even the weather cooperates as if the clouds themselves conspired for a happy conclusion.

Iona and Bea: Iona and Bea’s friendship shines like a beacon amongst the mundane. Their bond, forged over shared secrets and dog walks, tugs at our heartstrings. Their last chapter, filled with warmth and acceptance, is the novel’s saving grace. But alas, it’s a solitary oasis in a desert of predictability.

Lost Opportunities: The train platform becomes a missed opportunity— What about the grumpy ticket collector with a hidden past? Or the mysterious woman who always wears mismatched socks? These characters remain mere sketches, their potential untapped.

Candida’s One-Dimensional Greed: The money-grabbing antagonist embodies clichés. Her motivations are as transparent as the train windows. We yearn for complexity, and shades of grey, she remains resolutely black-and-white.

Final Thoughts: The book chugs along predictably, its wheels firmly on the rails. While some moments sparkle—a stolen glance, a shared umbrella—the overall journey lacks the thrill of unexpected detours. In summary, the novel offers comfort and familiarity. For those seeking literary surprises, this platform may not be the right stop. 🚂📖

Marks out of 10 a lucky 5

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